CAVES (original version)
- This story was commisioned
by a friend that wanted to send his wife a sexy story while we were
out at sea. I had tried on occasions prior to this to write
erotica, but I found it hard to discover the middle of dime store
romance novels and a letter to Penthouse. I nailed it on this
story...kindof. I ended the story before it came to the next
step.
Oddly enough, my friend loved it; along with
other male friends who read it. Woman seemed to hate it. The only draw
back the story had was that it clearly ends before the literary climax;
I think that's why they hated it.
CAVES
- So, a few weeks after writing Caves, I
went back and gave it a proper ending. I personally don't
really like it; it seems to go really cheesy
; but for some
reason women like it better than the original version. It goes to
show one thing......each to their own. |
